Pulled Away Peacefully

Pulled Away Peacefully

A Poem by James
"

Just goofing off while I've got a minute

"
The tables are empty, they've packed up to leave
The chairs stacked neatly, there's nothing to see
So we pulled out of town
with our truck loaded down

And we drove away peacefully.   

© 2020 James


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I love the way this could be ANYTHING! I'm thinking of this analogy . . . me, a fiercely independent person all my life (never married in 64 yrs & no relationship in 20 yrs), a loner, yet a lover & seeker of people, I go out to find a new discovery in life but eventually the tables become emptied out (humdrum of day-to-day relationship) & I hightail it to the next adventure, loaded down with memories of yet another escapade (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

1 Year Ago

It is pretty much about anything and everything...just living for the next thing



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So visual though you can interpret this in many different ways. The reader can decide how these lines work for them. Nicely conveyed James.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


Cool wite....really simple, but I enjoyed it.

Posted 9 Months Ago


James

9 Months Ago

Thanks. I think simple poems are the best.
light and ashes

9 Months Ago

Sometimes they are. :)
I love the way this could be ANYTHING! I'm thinking of this analogy . . . me, a fiercely independent person all my life (never married in 64 yrs & no relationship in 20 yrs), a loner, yet a lover & seeker of people, I go out to find a new discovery in life but eventually the tables become emptied out (humdrum of day-to-day relationship) & I hightail it to the next adventure, loaded down with memories of yet another escapade (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

1 Year Ago

It is pretty much about anything and everything...just living for the next thing
Packing up after a gig at the local bar is how it sounds to me
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

1 Year Ago

Ha, I didn't even think of that, but now it makes sense...except we still can't play at bars here
this is cute, very nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago


James

1 Year Ago

Thanks a bunch

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