Pulled Away Peacefully

Just goofing off while I've got a minute

The tables are empty, they've packed up to leave

The chairs stacked neatly, there's nothing to see

So we pulled out of town

with our truck loaded down

And we drove away peacefully.   

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love the way this could be ANYTHING! I'm thinking of this analogy . . . me, a fiercely independent person all my life (never married in 64 yrs & no relationship in 20 yrs), a loner, yet a lover & seeker of people, I go out to find a new discovery in life but eventually the tables become emptied out (humdrum of day-to-day relationship) & I hightail it to the next adventure, loaded down with memories of yet another escapade (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[James]

It is pretty much about anything and everything...just living for the next thing

[Chris Shaw]

So visual though you can interpret this in many different ways. The reader can decide how these lines work for them. Nicely conveyed James.

Chris

[light and ashes]

Cool wite....really simple, but I enjoyed it.

[James]

Thanks. I think simple poems are the best.

[light and ashes]

Sometimes they are. :)

[Ana Papaya]

Packing up after a gig at the local bar is how it sounds to me
:)

[James]

Ha, I didn't even think of that, but now it makes sense...except we still can't play at bars here

[Unspoken poet]

this is cute, very nicely written

[James]

Thanks a bunch