James Hamilton & The Mirror

James Hamilton & The Mirror

A Poem by James Hamilton
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James Smith Hamilton series part one. Read part two "James Hamilton & Angels"

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James Hamilton´s looking in the mirror,
the old, dirty mirror.

James Hamilton is young but his minds heavy,
Its an old man´s mind.

James Hamilton sometimes feels some headache,
because sometimes it gets to heavy for a young man that old man´s mind.

James Hamilton then needs something to get it light again,
that heavy mind.

James Hamilton will be found then in front of the old, dirty mirror,
with a bottle of fire water in his cold, white hands.

James Hamilton drinks the poison, let it run down his throat, it warms him,
warms his heart, which can´t beat under the weight of his old man´s mind.

James Hamilton´s looking in the mirror,
the old, dirty mirror.



© 2013 James Hamilton


Author's Note

James Hamilton
It´s my first writing so I would love to get some feedback.

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I liked how you ended and begun the peom the same way. I don't know who James Hamilton is, but I feel like you described him well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ah that fire water...always does the trick ;-) I think it's a pretty good start. Good luck with your novel.

Posted 11 Years Ago


James Hamilton

11 Years Ago

Tank you very much!!! :)
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.

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Added on February 4, 2013
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I´m a young starter with the aim of writing a novel. I´am 17 years old and my account belongs to my alter ego, which goes by the name James Smith Hamilton. An ancestor of James Smith Ha.. more..

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