Dream Land...

Dream Land...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Fantasy, Fun, Adventure...

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Dream Land...

Come on and follow me, let's slip away for awhile to dream land,
let's just take off with no set plan,

Let's leave our worries and problems behind,
and escape and enjoy our creative minds,

Let's do all the stuff we've always wanted to do,
it's dream land, it's completely up to you,

We can travel to far away lands,
and spend a hundred grand,

We could pretend, we're at the top of the world's tallest mountain,
or in Rome, embracing at the famous love fountain,

What about making love at some secluded tropical island,
maybe tucked away somewhere in Thailand,

Or fly a spaceship to Mars, and get a close-up
at the moon and the stars,

Wow, what about floating to heaven and visiting God,
and the rest of the brethren,

All of it sounds completely awesome!!!

Honestly, I don't care what we do or where we go in dream land,
just as long as you're present and holding my hand...

© 2015 Jamestown


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thanks for the invite Jamestown but is it ok if i bring my own partner along, she's better looking than you lol, just joking, seriously my friend what a treat it could be to do all those wonderful things, if i could choose one i'd take the trip to heaven, i have a passion for the idea but it might have to wait a while :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree with you completely! We will be there soon enough, praise God!
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Very playful--almost like a visit to Disney World.
Wanting that connection with a special person and sharing it in a paradise. Wouldn't be special and wonderful? Would it last?
Your images make it fun and inviting like a tourist on vacation in far away land--answer to the dream!
It is a place I go to in my mind to escape life's troubles like when I read a book.
Take me away Calgon!
Yes, I want to go--I'm hooked by your inviting words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, yeah it's definitely a calgon moment:)
Thanks again and b-blessed.. read more
Josie E. Cook M. A.

8 Years Ago

You are welcome!
What a perfect dream, go wherever you want , see whatever you want and do whatever you want...all while holding the hand of the one you love! Love this, beautifully written with fantastic imagery...Such a Dreamy write my friend.:))

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!
sereenaoutloud

8 Years Ago

my pleasure James to read such great writing :)
The dream was holding hands, all along... I knew it... all those places were simply bonuses! A lovely write James... hopefully you will find a hand to travel with!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
This is such a dream write. It's nice to dream and get away from reality. I enjoyed dreaming with you my friend.
A lovely write indeed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Aloha,

What a delightful read! Thank you for your suggestion...😃. It would absolutely be a dream to be with the one you love...doing absolutely anything your heart desires. And I do agree, all that matters is that you're together.

Completely... I can relate, totally.

Alisa💫

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Yes it would! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I love the feeling of dreams and making up whatever you want. That's what imagination is best at, right? I love the idea of slipping off to somewhere new and far, far away. Perhaps because I enjoy the feeling of being in a place where no one can find me. Magically written, brilliant work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks my friend, you know it means so much to receive your review!
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I loved it! It had a nice beat to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Thank you for taking me on a ride to dream land. Good write enjoyed reading it... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

For sure, b-blessed!
That was lovely! I am so happy that the night is ours and sleep offers us dreams that are all up to our imagination. We can do anything and be anyone in our dreams, and it is perfectly okay! Thanks for pretty images.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing, b-blessed!
I like your poem(s), which in turn is saying, I like your character, keep me posted.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Well thank you, all glory be to God, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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