If I could I would...

If I could I would...

A Poem by Jamestown
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But I know who can:)

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If I could...

If I could take every ounce of pain away,
If I could make everyday a day in heaven,
If I could answer all of your prayers,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If I could make you understand that his eyes
are always on you the sun and moon,
If I could die for you to make sure you have eternal life,
If I could guide you to paradise,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If I could make all your wrongs right,
If I could bring light to your dark nights,
If I could make you experience perfection,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If you want his number,
it's 1- 800 THE LIFE
he's been longing for your call...



© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
GOD IS GOOD!

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I love this so much.
It made my eyes teary.
Beautifully penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
You have a kind and compassionate heart James. I'm glad we're friends.

:) Julie

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

I feel the same way about you my friend, I too feel blessed to have you
as my friend:) Thanks.. read more
This is such an amazing poem! It is hard to believe the amount of love that there is for everyone on the earth.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Fantastic write. I have often wondered who but Jesus would have loved people who he had never seen or wasn't even born yet...but...He gave His own life to save them. He loves us, we are not alone, wake up world. Valentine Thank you for just being you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
again your faith shines through, my friend... you are the 411 of faith, James: you know who can!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
If you want his number,
it's 1(-) 800 THE LIFE
(He's) been longing (for) your call...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the tips and b-blessed!
Honestly, I enjoyed the "1 800 THE LIFE" part, I found it to be funny, even if it was not intended to be funny. This poem was really good, I could feel the emotion, the love. Well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jamestown

8 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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Jamestown
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Denver, CO



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