Saddness

Here is what i am feeling right now

People sometimes think saddness is an emotion,

But in my view it is torture.

I rarely feel saddness,

But when I do,

It hits me like a speeding train.

Why do we have saddness?

Does god want to torture us?

Maybe if we were nicer,

He wouldn't torture us.

So be nicer,

and you won't feel the torture.

Author's Note

Really sad mood right now. It is true it hits me likes that.

Reviews

[cheyenne moon]

beautiful. sadness is torture and we should all try to be nicer. liked your poem alot, keep writing!