My mind still paces

My mind still paces

A Poem by Jane

Not a second lost 

No, not a second 

The thoughts come and go, the mind stays 

awake. I am tired 

Still around I pace 

Around, like the circular motion of the moon

Toward the centre 

But always astray. 

© 2019 Jane


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This reminds me of something I've written before about the mind running in circles. I have moments such as these as well. I like the format of this poem. Sometimes its those random thoughts that make the most sense side by side. This was very well done. Great read.

Posted 7 Months Ago


I understand the poem. I run in circles and I try to keep up. I liked the ending and thank you Jane for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


This was a great poem to read, a little on the small font but a great poem to read none the less.

Posted 7 Months Ago



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Added on March 3, 2019
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Tags: poem, die, overthinking, time, lost, circular, moon, mind, around, depression, teen, modernity, gender

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