Snowflake

Snowflake

A Poem by Jane


I want to become 

A piece of snowflake 

That way I can fall

Upon your shoulder plates 

Dear sir, there’s no need 

To brush me off 

For merrily I shall

Be melting away. 


© 2019 Jane


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very nicely written, like this says a lot in just a little poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Nice observation of ending one moment and transformation from one form to another. What was lately at my head about snow is each snow flake have unique shape but when they,all together fall down they,create compact matter.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Strong imagery. I saw this clearly. Nicely done.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


i like brevity but strong imagery...
i get both here.
love the last three lines.
nice metaphor ...
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago



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