Away from this hostile world

Hostility never brings tranquility...

When everything turned stubborn
And no one came to even bother about,
Everyone was leaned busy and selfish
None could even hear me shout.

Can you really answer my question
Why is this world so much complicated ?
Like no person matters to another
None by other is affected.

Is there any place out of this world
Which is free from vain and hostility ?
Where there is only affection
None other than the place of tranquility.

Reviews

[Ashish]

That's the nature.
Where there is light, there is dark,
Where there is love, there is pain,
Where there is day there is night
Where there is prize there is sacrifice.

This is law

[Anindita Janhabee]

right........
but thing is that, today there is more darkness than light, more sacrifice than prize... Most lives go in vain without a single prize.... that's the thing of today... hostile world....
where only selfishness exists and no humanity...

[Ashish]

Ya, that's also true

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes we every person is struggling hard to find the peace of mind but tranquillity comes only from deep meditation and love.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes, you are absolutely right. But actually, no meditation will work when there will be hostile things around you, which also won't allow you to meditate or focus on a particular thing....

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Sometimes you have to climb the mountains to see the heights of other side.. Nothing is that easy in life except the meditation. Just concentrate on the in and out of breathing as simple as that..?

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you raise valid questions.........
but..........its actually us who complicate things..........but then again..........wouldn't it be too easy and no fun........
well rhymed!!!!
i really liked it!!!
:) :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot and u r right...
sorry for late reply though.... : )

[Nwang]

Humanity is made of greed, our morality and values are just for show. Everyone lies,everyone cheats and everyone steals, but once in a while there comes a moment in everyone's lives when we find something genuine. Till then we struggle on, and when we finally achieve that moment; all the complications, all the selfishness start to make sense because without it your search for tranquility would be meaningless. Nice poem btw, it was kind of refreshing to read a different concept in your poetry. Keep writing!!!

[Anindita Janhabee]

yes absolutely right.. and this is a sudden change in my poetry. Don't know how, but when all the feelings end, we're only left with such loneliness which produce poems like this... Thanks for the sweet review my dear... I am glad you're the first one to review this. And it's the truth that I wrote this poem when I was in Kolkata. I hv visited twice, I love traveling. And that place has some magic. I will be posting other pieces soon.. thanks again...

[Nwang]

You are welcome!! but remember loneliness can be like a drug little of it acts like a cure but if you take more it becomes an addiction. I love the fact you like Kolkata. I have been here for the last six years and I can support your statement about it being magical. Visit again and keep writing. ;)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Once again you're right my dear... Next time when I visit Kolkata, I'll surely meet u.. Thanks for the statement regarding loneliness though. I agree with it but there's nothing we can do when a person leaves us, when he's like the whole world to us. feeling lonely is obvious.... Few people can understand that, and loneliness had a friend called poetry. l started writing when I felt lonely and bored. So we can say, if everything is okay in life, then no need of writing poetry. Once my teacher told me that people are very happy today, so they aren't achieving the real aim truthfully...
And it's really the fact. When people will be subjected to strive and suffer, they'll try their best to do something worthy...
Enjoy the night...