Way to the Heaven

Reaching out so far...

Shivering leaves say
Only good ones can reach you
Moonlit night says
Only truthful ones can see you
Flowing water says
It's really hard to experience you
Bright sunshine says
Still it's possible for me
Soft roses sing
I too can reach up to you
Mom says
Only innocents get a place there
Dad says
I should try to be honest
My heart says still I can
Cause lying for good isn't a crime
And heaven will accept me
The way I am.....

Author's Note

A bit childish... But for God, we all are children and I pray for all to find a way up there!!!

Reviews

[Ashish]

Last eight lines are absolutely attracting..
"My heart says still I can
Cause lying for good isn't a crime
And heaven will accept me
The way I am....."

I'll definitely say, this is not childish. Many mature person have not even understood this. World also need to accept you as the way you are...But that never happens...


Thanks for sharing Ani :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you my dear...
Well, I don't really care if the world accepts me the way I am. I only want my close ones to do that, and it's really enough for me...
Thnk u...
i knw u too do accept me the way I am !!!

[Bala Gorthi]

What a beautiful write! Lying for good isn't a crime and heaven will accept. There is no doubt about it.
This is maturity and not childish..
You shine in all your writes, dear. I Loved this piece.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh!! thanks a lot dear ... your words are always highly appreciated... glad you liked it...

[Chris A Jones]

Sweet, innocent. I don't think it is childish. Love it!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for the visit sir...

[Chris A Jones]

You can call me Chris.

[Anindita Janhabee]

oh... ok...

[Sikandar Khan]

Nice You ARe Goood Writer You Writer in simple manner...........

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you once again...

[Nwang]

Heaven will accept you;however you are....coz heaven is here....right now.
Loved the writing and idea of lying,but don't lie to yourself.

[Adam Adams]

"Cause lying for good isn't a crime.. "

well, this line here hustling me to say more "lies" now.. lol xoxo

nevertheless, very honest poetry you strip yourself in. kinda naive. pure. innocent, & a very captivating as always. the message behind the poetry's very good (as always it's been). everyone should understand others, & rather getting lost somewhere in wickedness, one must try understanding the hoola hoops of life... in an order to make life not so complicated living. nice imagery here, as usual.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh Adam... you just rock with reviews...
hope u aren't doing for points...I know... coz I never do that.... well... thank u again... big one this time...

[Adam Adams]

points? what points?
do we get points for... or on.. reviewing others??? cool. I never reviewed others for points, but i guess, if I get points, imma have to do this for gaining points now. haha *smile*

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Lying is not good. The poem is very awesome but never lie. Face the truth and be brave always in life...

[Anindita Janhabee]

I always try... my best...
and I believe I do...
thank u... : )
stay happy : )

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks for the wishes :)