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- - Boundless love - -

- - Boundless love - -

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee
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Cause love has no bounds...

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I too love you…


I just don’t know how to begin

Also have no idea how did it happen,

Just three days of our meeting

And those three magical words have wrapped in…


Oh what a pleasure I get talking to you

And your cute smile that glows,

Has taken away my hunger and sleep

Just the perfect love it shows…


Isn’t it strange about the co-incidence?

That we both conveyed the same thing,

To each other overnight; I was awestruck

At your charming, loving and emotional being…


The only thing I desire for

Is your promise to be together forever,

Whatever may come along the way

I promise to care and endeavour…


Just can’t thank you enough

For binding this broken heart of mine,

I hope through this poetry

My love for you does shine…


When I say that I do admire you

Please feel it’s true and honest,

You are the one so sweet and kind

I always want to call the closest…


Whenever I say you goodbye

Please accept it without any sort of cry,

Because that will be the day

When I will die…

 


 

 

 

 

© 2016 Anindita Janhabee


Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
I hope the message gets into the heart...
Thank you for your warm reads...

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I hope there will be no good bye. Love endures every storm.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your time reading my work sir...
Shabeeh Haider

7 Years Ago

Most welcome
love that lasts forever...it will last to eternity---doesn't stop at physical death.....as Celine Deon sang...
"my heart will go on"

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Yes so true sir...
Thanks for the kind words...
The outstanding imagery in this romantic love poem is enhanced by the way you represented it.
Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job.
Keep up the outstanding work.
In other words I love it

Thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thank you Ayushi....
Glad you liked my work...
yes, your encouragement keeps me going.. read more
Ayushi Beura

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...you deserve that
Seems as if you adore someone truly...it is an awesome poetry...I can feel every word of yours...great

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Yes, truly....
thank you😃
Kind, gentle and hopeful words dear poet.
"When I say that I do admire you
Please feel it’s true and honest,
You are the one so sweet and kind
I always want to call the closest…"
The above lines stood out to me. Finding someone with same willing heart. A rare gift in a long life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot sir, for the kind and warm review... I'm glad you did like my work...😊
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Poet.
Last line! Awesome.
This shows your soul is lovely and your mind knows the true value of love.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sudeep...
Yes, the last parah is my favorite too..😃
Thanks a lot for the.. read more
I like the way your poem tells a story like a prose but doesn't lose its poetry if you know what I mean.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Yes I get it... By the way, I like 'story within a poem' so I always try out for that. ...
I.. read more
Cyprian Van Dyke

7 Years Ago

I like them too. Most of my poems have them. You're most welcome.
A very lovely poem on love for the love you feel a very very special person. There is also some beautiful rhyming in this poem. Love itself is an amazing phenomenon. The last stanza is very touching
To be able to express those sincere feelings this well shows great literary skills. I am amazed to see this poetry from a girl of your age. Take a bow from me for this write Anindita .
Reading your poetry is pure pleasure.
Keep writing. Your poems are very refreshing like the natures' showers.
Thanks for sharing. :-):-):-):-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Oh my goodness sir, I think the review is something more for me... I heartily appreciate the words y.. read more
Amazing poem I like the last stanzas very much. Love has to be like that :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

You're right!!! thanks for the warm visit my friend...
You hit the nail on the head when you mentioned coincidence. When fate shines upon us, it always looks for the strongest connections and always manages to find some familiar territory to get the ball rolling, it is only then that you begin noticing how many coincidences you have and that only builds a bigger target for cupids bow to take aim at. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your time dear... yes, the coincidence... it's never forgettable... it's the b.. read more

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