Apart and Depart

Being apart,
I met you
Being apart,
You admired me
Together we created a strong bond called 'love'...
Being apart,
You touched my heart
Being apart,
I read your eyes
Not in my wildest dreams was love possible to me...
Being apart,
You kissed me
Being apart,
I missed you
Both of us promising to be together forever and a little more than forever...
Being apart,
You reside in my heart
Being apart,
I was your soulmate
As we dreamt of our house of love far away...


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During departure,
You took away my heart
During departure,
You gifted me with tears
Breaking all the promises made before days...
While departure,
I called you back
While departure,
You didn't even turn to me
Leaving me all alone once again...
While departure,
I kept sobbing
While departure,
You began to like her
Making me worse than I was ever...

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Living a lifeless life without you
You won't come back, it's true...
How to smile and blush without you,
How to lead a lonely path without you...
How to take peaceful breath without you,
How to live a life without you.......

Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

A beautiful poem that highlights the ecstasy of falling in love followed by the sorrow of being separated and finally the pain of being discarded for someone else.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you sir for the warm read... It really pains so much...beyond imaginations... beyond wildest dreams...

[Jibey]

I thought the first section was beautifully moving and it touched my heart.. The rest did also, in a sad, disappointed way... The simple, short lines and the repetition provides an effective structure to the power of this poetry... So very affecting..

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for your wonderful time.... Yes, some stories don't have happy endings so those stories never end
.... it's very painful... when heart sobs in a way that we haven't ever imagined...
thnk u for ur kind words...

[Swati Nayak]

loved your new style of poetry ...repetitions add a new flavour to it..

[Anindita Janhabee]

Just tried something different to serve you readers a new taste.... Thanks once again.. 😉

[Swati Nayak]

Love make us cry and swim in utopia..........beautiful line

[Anindita Janhabee]

Indeed it is...

[Coyote Poetry]

Every goodbye break our heart.
"During departure,
You took away my heart
During departure,
You gifted me with tears "
Love make us cry and swim in utopia. We must know both. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for the kind review sir... Nice words of yours as usual...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I do enjoy your work.

[D Connolly]

Oh, first love is so wrenching! This brought me back to memories of my first boyfriend, whom I loved so much, and then the pain of the departure and moving on to new things and new places and new loves. Very beautifully written

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much ma'am.. I can connect to your dots...

[zunie frost]

i like how you filled your with love and sadness at the same time it's very unique way of writting i like it very much !!!
great job

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh dear thank you...
I'm glad you like it... 😃

[zunie frost]

it's my pleasure

[D]

Just forget the past, and look at the future till you still have one .

[Anindita Janhabee]

Hope always rises...but when it falls, none can help picking it up again...
Glad for the review after a long time..

[D]

get new hope . the torn apart past is fit for burial , not for a future .

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for the suggestion as well as for the read...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Saddest part of live to miss the one we love. But believe me love socks if we fail to choose a right person. I always prefer arrange marriages over love. Try to be safe in life rather just being too much emotional in love.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank u so mch for the first review...

[D Connolly]

That is an interesting take on it; I'm not familiar with arranged marriage because it isn't common in my country. However, I will say that I think part of being human is experiencing these personal joys and tragedies, and then learning to move on and experience new things. It's what makes life beautiful and special