Unrequited...

Unrequited...

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee
"

The purest form of love

"

A seed never sown
A plant that had never grown
A quill in air just blown
Something intangible and unknown...

A dream dreamt every night
Each darkness removed by that light
Out of touch, out of sight
Shining like the star so bright...

A wish remaining unfulfilled forever
Sometimes it's okay to be like a river
Cool breeze around yet no shiver
A feeling bittersweet however...

A heart that is broken
Once which was happily stolen
Letting a life darken
With just few words spoken...

© 2017 Anindita Janhabee


Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
"Unrequited love is the purest form of love..."

Please feel the emotions within my words.....

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I definitely felt the sadness in your words. I thought you painted a lovely, pristine picture. I especially loved the first and third stanzas. The last line in the last stanza pinched my heart.

I can relate to this poem, having being in love with someone who cannot be with me. It is indeed like a flower that will never fully bloom.

-Jazz

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your time reading ..... I appreciate your visit... yes, a flower that can never ful.. read more



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Wow. I felt the sadness and longing in each stanza. You did a great job at rhyming every line. I can vividly picture each line in my head. Very good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear writer for your time reading my work. I'll definitely read yours soon..
Sometimes it's okay to be like a river..
Very beautifully written here Anindita! Thank you for sharing. I love reading your writes..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thank you so very much dear writer....
thanks for liking my writings... it's the only reason .. read more
Very nice poem. It's so gentle and soothing sounding, but sad at the same time. I really liked it. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked this one..... keep visiting...
It's also the loneliest form of love. To give and never receive is the ultimate sacrifice in my opinion.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Yes... ultimate sacrifice... and to love is to sacrifice...
even this is true... well, sir, t.. read more
Chris A Jones

7 Years Ago

my pleasure.
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lua
there is such a beauty to your words, as though inspired by a love that will never bloom, never flourish and but part of it always resides within the broken heart and it will never be completely forgotten

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

You indeed caught my point and thanks for feeling the emotions... It's crazy how people fall but at .. read more
lua

7 Years Ago

i agree completely, love is at the essence of a human, and no matter how harrowing it may become, it.. read more
Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

very true...thank you..
I definitely felt the sadness in your words. I thought you painted a lovely, pristine picture. I especially loved the first and third stanzas. The last line in the last stanza pinched my heart.

I can relate to this poem, having being in love with someone who cannot be with me. It is indeed like a flower that will never fully bloom.

-Jazz

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your time reading ..... I appreciate your visit... yes, a flower that can never ful.. read more

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Jeypore, Odisha, India



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