Unrequited...

Unrequited...

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee
"

The purest form of love

"

A seed never sown
A plant that had never grown
A quill in air just blown
Something intangible and unknown...

A dream dreamt every night
Each darkness removed by that light
Out of touch, out of sight
Shining like the star so bright...

A wish remaining unfulfilled forever
Sometimes it's okay to be like a river
Cool breeze around yet no shiver
A feeling bittersweet however...

A heart that is broken
Once which was happily stolen
Letting a life darken
With just few words spoken...

© 2017 Anindita Janhabee


Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
"Unrequited love is the purest form of love..."

Please feel the emotions within my words.....

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I definitely felt the sadness in your words. I thought you painted a lovely, pristine picture. I especially loved the first and third stanzas. The last line in the last stanza pinched my heart.

I can relate to this poem, having being in love with someone who cannot be with me. It is indeed like a flower that will never fully bloom.

-Jazz

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your time reading ..... I appreciate your visit... yes, a flower that can never ful.. read more


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Wow..these lines are beautiful
A heart that is broken
Once which was happily stolen
Letting a life darken
With just few words spoken...
Very nice poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

thank you so much dear for your visit at my page...
keep visiting...
Can't agree more....Each line had very deep emotions attached to it.... when we love someone so Much and when it's not reciprotated back the same way it hurts...still we love....it's the purest form of love when we don't expect anything but just offer our love...thanks for sharing this wonderful creation....you are a gifted child keep writing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

Thanksssss lotssssss for your wonderful words... always appreciated dear....
At first I was of the opinion that the speaker had never experienced love, which jarred with the title and preamble.
The second stanza confirmed this feeling (and may I say, did it in a truly beautiful allegory).
Then we again are given the impression that love has never called at the speaker's door.
Finally in the last stanza the title makes sense. There was love... once.

I'd suggest a new title - perhaps not alluding to lost love so explicitly.
You do write beautifully Anindita.
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot sir for the depth of reading...
I truly appreciate your words... and your sugge.. read more
Tony Jordan

3 Years Ago

Welcome Anindita
Keep writing.
:)
all those things that will never blossom, this is such a deep pain

Posted 3 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

thanks a lot for ur time reading...
the first thing i thought of was how heartbreaking it is to witness wasted talent. It is sad how the most brilliant are afraid to shine their light on every hillside.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

Very true...
thanks a lot dear writer for ur kind words... glad for ur visit.
Great work, I think love unreturned is one of the most painful experiences possible yet you've turned it into something very beautiful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

thanks a lot for your time reading....
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SKY
So lovely and beautiful yet sad. For sure unrequited love is the purest form of love. Great work Ani.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear Sky...
SKY

3 Years Ago

Your most welcome Ani :)
What a beautiful play with words and a thought so intense. I just read your bio and after reading the poem I feel you are so mature in your writing. Take a bow girl, more power to you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear for your time reading and reviewing....
I'm glad you liked it...
Wow you are really going to be a great writer...just write each and every piece of your writing in a diary....please..and yes I can totally,totally understand this feeling of one sided love very deep into my heart...I agree with your words...

Posted 3 Years Ago


horizon

3 Years Ago

Yup....bt my unrequited love was not for the person I told. You about..it was of someone else
Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

yes I do know.. the person about whom you told me loves you equally and I'll definitely say you're l.. read more
horizon

3 Years Ago

Yes.....I do hope. That
Wow. I felt the sadness and longing in each stanza. You did a great job at rhyming every line. I can vividly picture each line in my head. Very good work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear writer for your time reading my work. I'll definitely read yours soon..

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