My Qualm (Qualm- WOTD)

My Qualm (Qualm- WOTD)

A Chapter by My Fair Lady
"

Taking A Stand Against Child Abuse

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My qualm is simple

I know what you did to me

And you - not sorry



© 2010 My Fair Lady


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A straight to the point poem. I like the strong words and honest feel to the words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


So sad! But you sound as if you are becoming more steonger by the day!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


And they never, ever are sorry...

Ugh - the "our little secret" phrase. Like it's something good.

Your honesty is treasured.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, too many times as children, we keep secrets too well. Child abuse, espcially of a sexual nature ruins children for a lifetime. Great senyru!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is just perfect , you scream so loud with only few words , I can feel you

Posted 11 Years Ago


spreads itself like liquid pain from the corona of the mind to the center heartbeat in tears~ powerful~

Posted 11 Years Ago


What a powerful message....thank you :)
Peace

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh! Powerful, this is.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a perfect poem. Almost a haiku ... or it could be a haiku since I don't remember the rules of haiku.

I wrote a review before reading the tag which is fine but after reading the tag the review didn't fit because it now has another depth of emotion that I previously didn't see.

Still, this is a perfect poem, evoking a range of emotion in three short lines. Though, now, I can't honestly say "I understand." This is powerful and the topic so emotional it's taboo.

The purpose of poetry is to humanize people that otherwise we either don't know or can't relate to because we feel they're too dissimilar to us. And you do this. Without knowing who this poem was for, or about, the emotion evoked could resonate with a thousand people who've never experienced the trauma of child abuse. It makes the emotion real and allows us to more perfectly empathize.

I do still need to get into poetry. It's the language that will change the world.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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