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A Poem by Janice Ann
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When all else fails...it finds you.

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Just in the nick of time you made me feel so complete.

 I feared this time would come and my heart would break.

But you saved me, you held me together.

 I was alone for so long, hoping your light would shine.

I wish I could say, I knew you’d come, that my world would shatter beyond repair.

But you surprised me, seriously flipped me inside out.

I was beyond ready for you love but I wasn’t prepared for you.

Time…

You found me…

Time…

Love…

You found me…

Thank you.

Just in the nick of time.

You’ve made me feel so complete when my  whole  world crashed down upon me.

Thank you.

 

Janice Ann

 

Copyrighted by Janice Tkachuk

© 2011 Janice Ann


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A sweet poem straight from the heart. very nice

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is an amazing poem! I can tell its from the heart, and is very well written. :p

Posted 7 Years Ago


a very beautiful poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is great.

im glad your family surrounded you and blessed you so with their endless love and support and that it was there for you to enjoy

Posted 8 Years Ago


Janice Ann, this is a beautiful soulful piece...........

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is inspiring. It gives one hope in love. Often we search for love but when it comes to us, we get the feeling that everything only happens when they are supposed to.

*In the seventh line "I was beyond ready for you love but I wasn’t prepared for you." I think the first "you" was meant to be "your".

Great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


i love this, so sweet and sincere with love and passion. When you least expect it love finds you, rather than you finding love. Once you feel what you have been missing you can now shine brightly. Love has a way of playing out... you were meant to feel this.. just in the nick of time! well done janice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this. It made me smile.

One maybe correction, in the second line: "I feared this time would come and my heart would break." I wonder if you meant the instead of this, or if it might flow better. Just a suggestion.

My favorite lines:
" I was alone for so long, hoping your light would shine.
I wish I could say, I knew you’d come, that my world would shatter beyond repair.
But you surprised me, seriously flipped me inside out."

Posted 8 Years Ago


funny how that just sneaks up on ya

Posted 8 Years Ago



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