Love

Love

A Poem by JanieB
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Innocent love..

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Love

The yearning pulling at my heart

Like an enormous pain

Deep within my soul

Pulling so, so hard.

 

I love you

Really..love you

From the bottom of my heart

What an amazingly powerful feeling.

 

I’ve never felt this before

Never felt the draw towards someone

So intensely before, like a magnet

Drawing me deeper and deeper.

 

I want to cry, I feel so happy

Happy to be part of your life

Hold my hand so tenderly

Pulling me closer to you, closer and closer.

 

My heart pounding

My knees weak

How can this be

The feeling of what they call love.

 

© 2010 JanieB


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I like it, I think and although I do agree with Tate, I believe the closer and closer gives it a good feel. So all in all I enjoyed this very much :) Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Magnetic love, who can escape it's pull, lets hope the poles never reverse.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very good portrayal of love here.
Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow! I can feel the emotion in every word with great conviction,
Excellent write.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow! I can feel the emotion in every word with great conviction, Thats love.
Excellent write.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Ok, so I really like this poem. It catches the reader right from the first line "The yearning pulling at my heart..." oh yes...we all (hopefully) know this one...and I love the line ".....like a magnet"...because in my experience, that's love...it draws you in like a magnet....and I love the final stanza..it#s almost as if the writer can't believe the feeling is real..great write..:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


it's such a wonderful feeling :)
Sometimes it's hard to describe that feeling :)
Great poem! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes, this too is very innocent, very romantic. Avery good write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


no words can explain love, they can only hint at it's essence, and your did well

Posted 9 Years Ago


love is a wonderful feeling...I miss it. Anyone who experiences it are very very lucky

Posted 9 Years Ago


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it's an intense feeling and one so addictive..lovely flow

Posted 9 Years Ago



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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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