Love

Love

A Poem by JanieB
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Innocent love..

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Love

The yearning pulling at my heart

Like an enormous pain

Deep within my soul

Pulling so, so hard.

 

I love you

Really..love you

From the bottom of my heart

What an amazingly powerful feeling.

 

I’ve never felt this before

Never felt the draw towards someone

So intensely before, like a magnet

Drawing me deeper and deeper.

 

I want to cry, I feel so happy

Happy to be part of your life

Hold my hand so tenderly

Pulling me closer to you, closer and closer.

 

My heart pounding

My knees weak

How can this be

The feeling of what they call love.

 

© 2010 JanieB


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I like it, I think and although I do agree with Tate, I believe the closer and closer gives it a good feel. So all in all I enjoyed this very much :) Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You are definitely a "write from the heart" type of poet. I really enjoy the style and I really enjoy the poems that you have shared with me. Thank you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nothing like the feeling of falling in love with someone. It's scary but exciting too. Your want to run to them and from them at the same time~ Great poem describing love.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Evocative!

Well done. This is an authentic and honest poem that tugs at the heart strings. I fell your passion.

Bravo!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Simply Lovely BRAVO ! god bless lily

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe, this is truly adorable. (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, I think and although I do agree with Tate, I believe the closer and closer gives it a good feel. So all in all I enjoyed this very much :) Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice if I have any critacism it is simply this in this quatrain
I’ve never felt this before

Never felt the draw towards someone

So intensely before, like a magnet

Drawing me deeper and deeper.

You break one of my own cardinal rules Never use the same word twice in the same quatrain such as the word before But other than that i rate it highly
tate

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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