In love

In love

A Poem by JanieB

In love


Tears of joy

Running down my face

Seeing you lying there

The love of my life.


You make me so happy

With your cheeky smile

Your tender kisses

Caressing me.


The longing for your body

Next to mine

Holding me close

Oh how I love you.


I look deep into your eyes

I see such beauty

Such intense warmth envelopes me

Wrapping me up in what I call love.

© 2010 JanieB

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I liked the feelings of this piece a lot, the reader can definitely pick up on the sensory images you use. Nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago

A sensual treat, to be so deeply in love was but a dream to me, how i do envy you

Posted 11 Years Ago

Aww, this is very sweet. I know these feelings well and you wrote of them perfectly.
Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago

nice poem..
love is so beatiful ..
you never knew what it holds in it..

Posted 11 Years Ago

Sweet and very tender write..makes me think of my younger days..Valentine

Posted 11 Years Ago

This piece brought back fond memories.....


Posted 11 Years Ago

it great to be in love. nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I love this poem. You expressed love so well, could feel it !

Posted 11 Years Ago

This made me smile for the pure fact it reminded me of how i feel. In the darkness there is love and this was so sweet. Thankyou!

Posted 11 Years Ago

I love it! I`m terrible at submitting helpful reviews, but I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on October 22, 2010
Last Updated on October 22, 2010



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