In love

In love

A Poem by JanieB

In love

 

Tears of joy

Running down my face

Seeing you lying there

The love of my life.

 

You make me so happy

With your cheeky smile

Your tender kisses

Caressing me.

 

The longing for your body

Next to mine

Holding me close

Oh how I love you.

 

I look deep into your eyes

I see such beauty

Such intense warmth envelopes me

Wrapping me up in what I call love.

© 2010 JanieB


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I liked the feelings of this piece a lot, the reader can definitely pick up on the sensory images you use. Nicely written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A sensual treat, to be so deeply in love was but a dream to me, how i do envy you

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aww, this is very sweet. I know these feelings well and you wrote of them perfectly.
Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice poem..
love is so beatiful ..
you never knew what it holds in it..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sweet and very tender write..makes me think of my younger days..Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


This piece brought back fond memories.....

Peace
Robin

Posted 8 Years Ago


it great to be in love. nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this poem. You expressed love so well, could feel it !

Posted 8 Years Ago


This made me smile for the pure fact it reminded me of how i feel. In the darkness there is love and this was so sweet. Thankyou!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it! I`m terrible at submitting helpful reviews, but I like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 22, 2010
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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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