In love

In love

A Poem by JanieB

In love

 

Tears of joy

Running down my face

Seeing you lying there

The love of my life.

 

You make me so happy

With your cheeky smile

Your tender kisses

Caressing me.

 

The longing for your body

Next to mine

Holding me close

Oh how I love you.

 

I look deep into your eyes

I see such beauty

Such intense warmth envelopes me

Wrapping me up in what I call love.

© 2010 JanieB


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Wow. There is a real purity and innocence about this piece. It's almost childlike in its innocence actually. The final stanza stands out for me...."Such intense warmth envelopes me"....how we all yearn for this sensation and experience.....love it.:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes, a very sweet little romance poem! Very cute.

Posted 13 Years Ago


sweet romance

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ahh...the touch of love wrapped up in a lovely emotional write

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is suck a great poem i am a sucker for romance!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


such a nice poem. A look into the heart of another. Wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


your a very good writer

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very beautiful! Picturesque!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is wonderful i liked this

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet nice and Short and to the point. god bless lily

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 22, 2010
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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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