10 words

Stipulated 10 words to be used in no more than 40 word poem.

10 words

 

Looking out from my huge empire

The season changing

Rain is falling

Upon the dead, yellow moss

 

Snow Covering the frozen lake

Mist rolling over the valley beyond

Oh what a sight, now I feel such a fake

What empire?

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

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11 words

rolling yellow moss
covering dead fake
empire rains
in lake season.

It was a challenge, but I tried to make at least a stanza on the words given. Couldn't and added [in] & one [s]. It really makes no sense, as sometimes poetry doesn't appear to right away. Even less sometimes in free form Prose. I enjoyed the trying and really enjoyed your well written poem. I think I'll try within the 40 the make a recognizable pretext... Thanks for making me smile.

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[Light]

this is good! definitely a masterpiece given the fact that those 10 words don't really seemed too related to one another! brilliant!

[sarah]

interesting!

[Marie Harrison]

Cool, bet that was fun wasn't it~!

[Dark Empress]

Tough challenge, great work :)

[Tate Morgan]

that was a tough challenge you did well

[Cassie316]

That looks like a fun exercise. I'm not sure I could put ten random words together into a poem this good =)
though I have to add that the second to last line almost doesn't make sense, but I don't really notice too much when I read through this =)

[JanieB]

10 words stipulated to be used in this poem of no more than 40 words total..
Empire, Moss, Dead, Yellow, Covering, Season, Rain, Fake, lake, Rolling.