I'm sorry

I’m sorry

 

How could you leave me?

I thought we could try again..

For so many years

I battled to keep you, but it was not to be.

 

A lifetime of memories,

Through laughter and tears,

We built a fabulous life together

Thought it would last forever though.

 

I try to recall what went wrong

Can’t put my finger on why it crumbled?

Our fairytale relationship

So envied by many.

 

Please come back my darling,

I beg you to try again!

I promise to try harder,

To be your soul mate again.

 

I cannot think what else to say

Except I love you

Please accept my apology

Let’s try again.

 

Reviews

[MJ Durston]

I think I can definately understand where this poem came from, particulary what you must have been feeling at the time. I don't think it flowed so well, but I think that fact is hidden by the relatability of it overall. Could have used some punctuation here or there which definately would have improved it's flow by a lot actually. I think you did well here.

There's always room for improvement.
Best of luck in future writing,
Melissa

[JewelsGold]

I so relate, so so much. It is unreal what it means to lose our soulmate.
It is unworthy of a mere verbal description.
I feel this poem intrinsically.

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if love could be bottled..we would make a fortune..but it remains elusive...

[Marie Harrison]

This is sad. I felt the same way. I would have done anything to have him come back to me. Sorry for your pain. It's strength does go away though. Now I wouldn't go back or take him back. Great job!

[Dark Empress]

Aw, so sad and yet kinda sweet to. Thanks for sharing, great write :)