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Freshly scrubbed floor

Freshly scrubbed floor

A Poem by JanieB

 

Freshly scrubbed floor

 

Okay, so this the deal

No dragging chairs across me

No jumping up and down

No cats scratching on me

 

I’m gleaming you see

All polished and shining

No dust on me now

I look great I know

 

I smell so fresh

Been scrubbed with fair hands

Lovingly restored

To my former self

Thank you.

© 2011 JanieB


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respect da floor! Well done! If a floor could feel (and what proof is there it doesn't?), this might be what it would say. :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love it. Clever and creative. A new perspective.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats the first time the floor talked to me, next time I will take my shoes off


Great work, well thought out, unique

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it leave that floor alone to enjoy the feeling of clean.great imagry

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha great idea good poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol I love this poem! Really cute and funny. Terrific idea.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha, great personification!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So clean I could eat off it! “But then the floor might get up set”
You think?


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know I bet floors does say that if they could talk!! Love it!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The personification works nicely. This remind me of childhood exercises in eng lit class.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 11, 2010
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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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