Lovers

Menke.. 1 to 13 syllables in 13 lines

 

LOVERS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

HELLO

MY FRIEND

HOW ARE YOU?

YOU’RE MY LOVER

YOU’RE MY EVERTHING

I ADORE YOU SO MUCH

YOU MAKE MY LIFE SO COMPLETE

DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU?

I WANT TO BE WITH YOU FOREVER

NOW YOU’RE HERE IN MY LIFE, PLEASE STAY WITH ME

LET’S HOLD EACH OTHER SO CLOSE, AND KISS ALL NIGHT

MY DARLING, MY HEAD IS SPINNING SO FAST IT HURTS

I’M ON BENDED KNEE, PLEASE WILL YOU MARRY ME BABES?

 

Author's Note

"Menke"..one to thirteen syllables, in thirteen lines.
Bit of a challenge..

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Cute little poem. (:

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful expression of love, drifting down this dancing form. You celebrate the joy and wonder of love!

[Goodbye]

Such sweet romance!

[Morgan]

this is a good poem! what every woman wants her man to be like...

[sarah]

Make it flow a little better deffently! but a good poem!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is lovely.. i like and you make it flow a little better

[Joshua Smit]

its good... you could put a lot of work into making it flow though...

[Wondering Mind]

Lovely proposal.

[Helena]

Lovely sentiment wrapped in this "menke". Thank you for submitting this beauty to my contest! ~ Helena

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet poem. I'm wondering if this is your fantasy, memory or real. It's truly lovely.