My friend from afar

My friend from afar

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My friend from afar

We have never met

The friendship we have amazes me

I long for the day we meet

 

We have shared so much

You have told me your thoughts

Your feelings, your woes

I too have shared mine

 

It’s incredible how we clicked

The first time we spoke on the net

Like long lost buddies

Yet I feel you are such a dear friend

 

My feelings for you grow each day

As we get to know each other more and more

I am falling for you..I need to tell you..

I already have!

 

I long to hold you

I long to smell you

I long to kiss you

I want you to be mine, my dear sweet net friend.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Be careful I would say and should you ever meet yo arrange the place ten it away and watch to be sure they are who you think

[Sweets]

This is great, so friendly and cute (:
Great work!

[Liza]

this sounds more than just a platonic e-buddy - this person ignites love and romance and longing....sweet write.

[Carolina Kel]

This is sweet and well written, although the lack of rhyme scheme is bugging me out, but that's only because I'm in a poetry class and poetry keeps popping up in all of my other classes.
I like it, bottom line. :) Good expression of emotions.

[Valentine]

Funny how lonely people can get caught up in net romances and get hurt in the end as all people are not honest about who they really are..lol and God bless..valentine

[Linear]

Look stop calling me Net lol, Ah romantic yes, but so often heartbreak follows online romance, for here things get built up out of all recognition, all is so intense, guard your heart. the poem is beautiful though, and yes i have shared such feelings

[Cynthia]

Its SO romantic, thats lots of story like that, however, theres also risk in talking to a net friend. I dont mean anyone is not trustable here, is just, the risk is here *shrug* I can relate to this very well, since thats how we feel sometimes:)

[Rossen]

I know the feeling, good writing

[KAREN]

Roamantic and heartfelt! Excellent poem!!

[sarah]

This is so sweet!