You Raped Me

You Raped Me

A Poem by ..R.I.P..
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Hard to write.

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I ran through the woods

Screaming for someone to save me

But no one ever did

Because no one ever cared

You found me hiding in a cave

You pushed me down

And ripped off my clothes

You raped me,

Took away everything that was pure

Now I'm scarred for life

With the filth and the guilt that I couldn't stop you

I couldn't get away

I screamed and screamed until I couldn't any longer

You raped me,

The one person I thought I could trust...

© 2009 ..R.I.P..


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this is... loud

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh, my gosh! This hits my core. I don't want to say I feel sorry for you, but I do want to be a friend when you need someone. I have gone through this too, and only a decade later have I found what it's like to have friends help you up from a fall like that. You are strong to share you emotions like this. Kudos. I appreciate you sharing this as well. Very well written and penned.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I am with Worthless .

Posted 14 Years Ago


I don't feel sorry for you >.< I Know how much it sucks with all the sympathy. I know all the fake lines. I could say them to you now. And it might make you feel better. But I aint gonna say them cause I know you don't really wanna hear them. You told your story. You let out the emotion and it was good write. The smbolic side of things was good aswell.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is a good piece. I saw the scene play out in my head while I read this. Thank You for writing it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yeah.....i know what yall will say.......and i don't want you to feel sorry for me!

Posted 14 Years Ago


As I read this, it played in my mind..there are few things i can read that are simple and yet give the most vivid description. good write.it must've been painful for you to, but thankyou

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Zak
I understand how this would make sense. Perhaps you weren't raped physically, but you were betrayed in another sort of ultimate way. A rape of the soul. Good work, even though it was hard.

-ZTM

Posted 14 Years Ago



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