Rubber Sandwiches

Rubber Sandwiches

A Poem by Mason
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This poem is edible!

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Why run about in open fields

To capture fleeing game

When food comes out in images

And beckons to your name

Their meals are ones of plenty

So long as one can pay

For men who starve in city streets

Are relics of the day

When we ran about in open fields

To capture fleeing game

© 2010 Mason


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very good! i like this poem! from the days of hunting game to having enough money to pay. i liked the concept of this poem, but you should add punctuation. it makes it easier to read (in terms of connecting the dots with one another, concept/thought-wise)

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This was very clever and I really appreciate the point you make with it. Excellent work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I really wanted you to elaborate on this. Another interesting concept but would have really liked to have something a little more meaty!

Posted 9 Years Ago


very good! i like this poem! from the days of hunting game to having enough money to pay. i liked the concept of this poem, but you should add punctuation. it makes it easier to read (in terms of connecting the dots with one another, concept/thought-wise)

-light-

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liet I feel like it should be longer by a few but i like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Not bad. It almost sounds like a limerick. Nice flow and good rhymes. I approve.

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Added on December 1, 2010
Last Updated on December 4, 2010
Tags: food, corporations, processed, high, fructose, corn, syrup, hunting

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Mason
Mason

Omaha, NE



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My name is Mason. I love the bizarre. I love to write. I think language is universal, and if we could write poetry to be understood by the other creatures of this Earth, we would be one step closer to.. more..

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