I won't be alone

Just a little hope

A life once so vital
a body so strong
Fades like a love melody
I fear the end of the song

I hope that you're out there
Patiently waiting
And when the time comes
There'll be no hesitating

You'll blow into my life
Like a sweet ocean breeze
All the pain and the sorrow
Your presence will ease

So wrap your strong arms around me
And hold me so tight
Till all sadness and loneliness
Are far out of sight

Reviews

[JannaBanana]

Many frogs kissed to find the prince. Liked this Jannabanana

Posted 1 Day Ago
Thanks for your insight Gee, but this writing is more about death and God.

[Gee]

Many frogs kissed to find the prince. Liked this Jannabanana

[JannaBanana]

Thank you Rob and James for taking the time to read my poem. It is the first one I have shared with others.
So glad you enjoyed it.

[Bohrium Guy]

I think you done a great job at your imagery and presentation. I can see that it was written how I expressed elsewhere in our convos.

Well done and thanks for sharing!!

~Rob~

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
All in due time:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!