Found u

Found u

A Poem by Johnny A. Rojas
"

Joy in the feeling of finding love

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Slowly walk through this page, 

take your time and find yourself.

Because i have you on my mind

and there so much to say, 

but hardly any time.


Take me as I am, 

look deeply into my heart; 

find the beating part, 

the one with your name in it. 


Now smile at my indecision 

and take pride in my knowledge 

that i know what i need 

and is in you my dear 

that i find a soul worth holding. 


Jump back and watch yourself laugh, 

take me into your life. 

Let’s dream a dream within a dream 

and somehow in this dream 

no errors have been made.


I enjoy your walking grace 

i enjoy your smiling face. 

In my life there is a place 

that smiles every day we speak. 

Darkness only appears 

whenever you are not near, 

dark circles in the sky 

bring the stars to cry.

 

There's no more stars up in heaven 

cause you showed them how to be free;

since from heaven you left

to cast your spell on me. 

Now i will forever be found 

up in heaven when i’m with you.

I knew you will find your place here 

cause i have you in my head. 

As i compose this little note for you, 

i can cry a symphony too 

but ever since i found you 

i’ve been singing this song for you.


I love you, i truly do....

I’m happy because i found u


***Johnny A. Rojas*** 

July 19, 2010

© 2010 Johnny A. Rojas


Author's Note

Johnny A. Rojas
Words from heart not trying to fall into a pattern of any kind

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Okay now i have a complaint here.You should and should have used punctuations over here and also structured this more simply cause this poem is beautiful,it has a certain dreamlike trait to it which can only be justified if you added more impact to this,which is only possible if you structure this more.This is beautiful.

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I will work on structure is just that i never had proper teaching...so i will read it over and just see where it falls...thank you Swaha

Posted 10 Years Ago


Okay now i have a complaint here.You should and should have used punctuations over here and also structured this more simply cause this poem is beautiful,it has a certain dreamlike trait to it which can only be justified if you added more impact to this,which is only possible if you structure this more.This is beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Johnny A. Rojas
Johnny A. Rojas

Kissimmee, FL



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