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The Flower Weeps

The Flower Weeps

A Poem by J.R Schlievert
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A petal of a flower gently hit the grassy ground below. 
Its silky, velvety fabric floats so carelessly in the breeze 
As it contacts the ground, it imprints its self in the gentle, sponge like grass  
Where it sits forever, until a force of wind sweeps it off for a ride to the unknown 
 
The flower cries of the pour little petal 
Like a mother of a missing child 
The flower cannot do anything 
Its helpless 
 
As the petal rides, the world seems to be more open to it 
The vast landscape of the meadows 
Hill enshrouded with a green coat 
Trees as tall as the white mountains in the great distance 
 
The petal is also watching the birds flying and talking in the everlasting sun 
One bird swoops down and catches the pedal in its hard beak 
The bird flies in the other direction of the chilly wind 
And places the petal next to the weeping flower 
 
The flower is forever grateful to the little blue bird 
The brilliant orange color of the flower turned even brighter 
And now, the bird sits next to the flower 
Until the last grain of sand form the big hourglass in the sky is left  

© 2009 J.R Schlievert


Author's Note

J.R Schlievert
just of fun :) say whatever

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Poem is very beautiful. You create a very good vision. Nature is art form if we open our eyes to see. A a amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is beautiful, i love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is quite the touching write really. Beuatiful as well.
You are a wonderful writer, very expressive!

Posted 9 Years Ago


the imagrey was wonderfull! ive read some of ur poems and you always seem to deliver! keep it up id love to read more

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can picture it really well. I love the human qualities and feelings in this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is really cool! I like it alot! The imagery used in this poem is astounding! Please continue writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow... J.R., to tell you the truth, your poems really get to me. Such detail, imagery, vocabulary, and emotion! It's all wonderful and awesome! I loved it!!! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow your writing is amazizing..... an i spelled it wrong on purpose :p


Posted 9 Years Ago


This idea is so original. I've never read anything like it. Your work is absolutly beautiful.

Well Done :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


Loved the last verse the best. And such a lovely concept!

BUT!!!!!

Pedal = PETAL !

haha every time I read 'pedal', I thought of bikeriding haha :)

big hugs
Kara

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 20, 2009
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J.R Schlievert

Queen Creak, AZ



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