Red Window

Red Window

A Poem by J.R Schlievert
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Red Window

Red Window, Red Window open up your pane.

To let out the pain, of a girl once slain.

Red Window, Red Window bring in the light.

How do you bring light from this frostbitten night.

Red Window, Red Window who saw the father.

Of the girl once slaughtered, and blood gone cold.

Red Window, Red Window bring back the life.

Of a loving wife, and a caring daughter.

Red Window, Red Window who saw the man.

Knife in his hand, slowly going up the stairs.

Red Window, Red Window who saw the blood.

Body dragged through the mud, on flower buds.

Red Window, Red Window where did they go?

Red Window, Red Window

© 2010 J.R Schlievert


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J.R Schlievert
hoped you liked it :)

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a total mental intrusion, perverse, and dark...I like it, cool scribe

Posted 8 Years Ago


A very dark write, alot of drama in this poem.
Love the flow and theimagery!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Brilliant and dark. I loved it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this tells a story so well great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


So I pretty much am in love with this poem!!!!! The rhyming and the tone...everything is working very well throughout and i love the small story you have intertwined within it too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This poem just strikes me. It makes me shiver with your descriptions. I wish there was more of a story to it but I fear that anymore and it would ruin it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


great poem! when it stopped rhyming it threw me off a bit though

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing. I love it! I can see why it would win an award. Very beautifully put together and ryhmes, something i dont see very often. I can see glimpses of a story behind it and i love how it all comes together.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I loved it!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Reminds me of the nursery/game, Red Rover. Honestly, I can say this intrigued me and held my attention. Good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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J.R Schlievert
J.R Schlievert

Queen Creak, AZ



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