Parasite Fetish

Parasite Fetish

A Poem by J.R Schlievert

Another Classic By J.R Schlievert I hope hahah


She creeps around without sound

She listens carefully

Not a sound, not a word

Shes home ward bound


The love of her life

Till death does she part

In this case she did

Motivated by strife


Don’t wake the children

For gods sake

Home ward bound

The note once written


Don’t bother cleaning up

It was a mess already

It will be handled

Note under the coffee cup


Shes a talented sneaker

Her feet approaching the door

Don’t wake the kids for gods sake

Laughing all the way to the bank


All the men she has met were selfish

Crude and rude

One thing in common

They all had a parasite fetish

© 2010 J.R Schlievert

Author's Note

J.R Schlievert
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I really like the last two stanza's It tells me so much about the poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very good, I really like this. I can't really say anythign about it though, otherwise it would seem like I just stole SilentVerses review XP but this is amazing still (:

Posted 10 Years Ago

Beautifully descriptive, sneaky and sensual in its delicate tone, joyous temptation between the lines of serious connotations, I like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago

You never cease to amaze me love. =D

Posted 10 Years Ago

Well, I can truly appreciate this in ways I can't even explain. This is well written and the point was made very clearly. I enjoyed the way it was written, and the inclusion of the children, naturally. It had a personal, distant bitterness that gave it a bit of a flair. Very well done and quite enjoyable.


Posted 10 Years Ago

Wow, I loved the use of irony in this!

Good work here, it was vey enjoyable.

Posted 10 Years Ago

i like this

Posted 10 Years Ago

This was good, kind of hard to keep up with, and the rhyme scheme was jumpy, but it was a good! Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on November 27, 2010
Last Updated on November 27, 2010


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