Parasite Fetish

Another Classic By J.R Schlievert I hope hahah

She creeps around without sound

She listens carefully

Not a sound, not a word

Shes home ward bound

 

The love of her life

Till death does she part

In this case she did

Motivated by strife

 

Don’t wake the children

For gods sake

Home ward bound

The note once written

 

Don’t bother cleaning up

It was a mess already

It will be handled

Note under the coffee cup

 

Shes a talented sneaker

Her feet approaching the door

Don’t wake the kids for gods sake

Laughing all the way to the bank

 

All the men she has met were selfish

Crude and rude

One thing in common

They all had a parasite fetish

Author's Note

Tell me what you honestly think, i want to get better :) learn from my mistakes

Reviews

[Samantha]

I liked it. I know its hard to rhyme so i found that impressive but some parts were slightly hard to follow, but i know poems do that sometimes. I did enjoy reading it very much though. Thanks for sharing

[Cassandra D.]

this was a very interesting poem! - enough said :]
But seriously, i thought it was pretty well written.