Internal walls to the first that falls

Internal walls to the first that falls

A Poem by J.R Schlievert

just...ya haha


Internal walls to the first that falls

Make the call that will notify all

I was the first that fell

do I dwell on the bell?

Everlasting drop

to the painful flop










bone meeting concrete sweet

poetry in its finest form

broken bones with ligaments torn

Dare I to tell you

that the sky is not blue

rain drops on my body

blood drops are spotty

thin lines are a little shady

maybe I could make the whole world go crazy


© 2011 J.R Schlievert

Author's Note

J.R Schlievert
just a little something to make you think :)

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I loved it Jarin. Your amazingly talented. (:

Posted 7 Years Ago

It's intense, graphic, sad and eerie. Wich is exactlly why I love it. (:

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very Graphic and eerie!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Excellent write! And it does make one think!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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