Internal walls to the first that falls

Internal walls to the first that falls

A Poem by J.R Schlievert
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just...ya haha

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Internal walls to the first that falls

Make the call that will notify all

I was the first that fell

do I dwell on the bell?


Everlasting drop

to the painful flop

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bone meeting concrete

awwww...how sweet


poetry in its finest form

broken bones with ligaments torn

Dare I to tell you

that the sky is not blue


rain drops on my body

blood drops are spotty

thin lines are a little shady

maybe I could make the whole world go crazy


maybe...

© 2011 J.R Schlievert


Author's Note

J.R Schlievert
just a little something to make you think :)

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I loved it Jarin. Your amazingly talented. (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


It's intense, graphic, sad and eerie. Wich is exactlly why I love it. (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very Graphic and eerie!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Excellent write! And it does make one think!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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J.R Schlievert
J.R Schlievert

Queen Creak, AZ



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