Pretty Eyes

 She was the girl with the pretty eyes 

Crisp blue, like the evening wind

The ones that always leaked

Small droplits like the morning dew

The ones that held so much pain

The kind you feel when being stabbed in the back

By someone you thought you loved

But her eyes

Always looked like that

They where such pretty eyes

I wish they where happy

I wish i knew why they where sad

I wish i could help her

If only i knew, what was wrong

Those pretty, pretty eyes

They make me cry to

 

Reviews

[M. Amphet Salt]

I like this to. It has empathy to it for another, or perhaps its about oneself. Your word choices are great and you use good imagery. A comma needs to be placed between pretty, pretty. As well, you should capitalize the first words of the lines. Ofcourse thats my opinion.