The Sad Part Is

The sad part is

When I am not your priority anymore

Because norms dictate. That right is right and wrong is wrong

The sad part is 

We are far apart in mind but still binded in soul

The sad part is 

Fighting the feeling that we are feeling

When there is no point in fighting anymore

The sadder part is 

we cannot do what we should be doing

Because doing it, is unforgiving

The saddest part is 

We still feel what we feel 

But cannot fulfill anymore....

The saddest, saddest, part is we still feel we belong, when it should not be.

Reviews

[Shelley Warner]

I think your use of repetition is very effective and conveys emotion in a nice way.

[Jasmin]

One of my techniques to highten the emotion put on the poem. Thank you for noticing...

[MoriartyMesa]

Mother of God this read like a break up letter. Good, just now worried about the poor b*****d whom received this d.m.

[Jasmin]

The reaction though hahahahhahaha. Thank you for the review Moriarty!