Immortals

Yet The Song To Immortality.

"Time - my greatest friend

 and my greatest enemy.

 Racing the grim reaper to fold

 the past to please these ghosts.

 Wake the night and shadows

 form my soul into lights weapon.

 Darkness - rolls off my dry tongue 

 blistering to taste the lustful rain.

 Wet and dry my heart fuels my fire

 walking with chaos as my side kick.

 Hoping this night ends with a bang

 reaching into the air for adrenaline.

 Blood races down our faces

 while the skies rage with death.

 The moment of victory lies within

 the mountain covers our backs.

 One way in - no way out this time

 we stand ready to fight the demons.

 Curve the thought of escaping into

 desperations desire to block failure.

 Hold tight and ride on into the inevitable 

 step by step we march into the dark.

 Battle scars and battle cries sings 

 the anthem of the immortals. 

 //Death is our general and hope our wings

 what are we 'immortal' - we are 'immortals'.

 Sing along with fear near we become the spear

 dance with the dead and put lead in their head. 

 What are you 'immortal' what are we 'immortals'." 

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Profound and in a moving way. Your sentiments are exotic in my opinion. You sew words together in a riveting way.