When The Time Comes

Where Time Stands Still For A Moment.

"A walk through memory line begins

 when tragedy whistles harmony.

 Forgiven the past plays sweet music

 to the beat of our lonely hearts.

 The abandon gracefully holds me

 with the promise of loves future.

 Forgotten? have i really missed it

 precious i intent on release of time.

 I have to sit and think where i go

 where this road will lead and why.

 Light of the dawn shines warm

 peace comets into my loose soul.

 Dark of the set chills coldness

 sadness tickles into my heart.

 I Stand alone hoping for someone..anyone

 to understand who i am but i know darkness.

 She plays with me like a puppet on strings

 she laughs when i say i want out but no.

 She's my love and i see the other side

 the light within i found sitting on this bench.

 I open my eyes again to see the sun rising

 but when the time comes we will meet again."

 

 

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

Sweetly delicate. I see hope and sadness. I wonder... Does he love her or is it a game? Does she toy or is it simply miscommunication? A fabulous writing that provokes the reader to think, and maybe it asks more questions than it answers. Nice work!

[Yasmin]

I love the thoughts and the emotions hidden between the lines
Some were perfect
Though it needs a little more editing and I hope you complete it because it is really good and you can do better
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