The White Box

The White Box

A Poem by Jason Shadows
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From A Snowy Reality.

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"Keep Within A Simple Fantasy.
 But Hold Onto A Realness Of Reality.
 Hold Strong And Run Into A Dying Fear.
 Release The Truth And Walk Right Into Love.

 Here I Can Finally See You.
 Here I Can Finally Be You.
 Break Away From All That Lies.
 Break Away From All That Haunts.

 Indelible As You.
 I Rinse Of Sins.
 I Hold With Pain.
 And Within I Rain.

 So Peaceful In War.
 So Dreadful In Temptation. 
 But Under As Your Direct Conflict.
 I Read You Into My Immortal Will.
 
 It Has Been So Long Until I Realized.
 How It Becomes So Of What Precious That I Prized.
 Here Within This Battlefield - Death Has Finally Found Love. 
 As My Hands Feel Your Soul As I Sit In This White Box Of Endless Snow."

© 2011 Jason Shadows


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Captivating... beautifully dark and richly delivered. I was riveted from the start and thoroughly enjoyed it :}

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your talent in writing is so unequivecly extraordinary. It's very interesting to read your writes every time, this one wasn't bad, especially the way you turn the story. Thanx for writing L(>.^)J

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you put everything together and I love the word use. Very well written. Good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


You have a lovely way of putting your words together.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Not sure if I've said this before but you have such a unique STYLE of writing. The wording, metaphors you use, rythm--it's non-generic, and unique only to you. I just about tell something you've written without even reading the name. I think the stanza that struck me most in this piece was: Indelible as you/i rinse of sins/i hold with pain/and within i rain.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very nice....striking thought and picture as well

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Indelible As You.
I Rinse Of Sins.
I Hold With Pain.
And Within I Rain."

Even though I love this as a whole I really think this stanza is powerful. Excellent write..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


agreew with lady neida ! wow ! awesome poem !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 30, 2011
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Jason Shadows
Jason Shadows

I'm your shadow within the light., NC



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