Timeless

Evolution Of Happenings.

"If I Could Stand There Again. 

 On The Edge Of Eternity.

 With You My Queen.

 Of Happiness. 

 You Said Something So Precious.

 To Me It Has Me Driven.

 Into Chaos Within.

 Breaking Temptation.

 I Will Always Remember Those Words.

 I Have Become Forgetful.

 You Will Be Forever. 

 In Shadows.

  

 But You Still Hold My Lost Soul.

 Within Your Hourglass.

 Falling I Fall Forever.

 Without You.

  

 For It Was You Who Pushed Me. 

 Off The Ledge Of Paradise.

 But In My Timeless Heart.

 You're My Light.

 Now I Believe In An Evolution.

 That We Are Together.

 And Your Smile In Time. 

 I Will Remember."

Reviews

[MissHollywood30]

Beautiful poem, very inspiring, lots of emotion in the words too :)

[Emberlorna]

I love the images of love your words inspire. The over all beauty & darkness consumes. It's so captivating and beautiful.
"But You Still Hold My Lost Soul.
Within Your Hourglass.
Falling I Fall Forever.
Without You."

[MOON]

This is a poignant beautiful write, great lines.

[Emerald Seas]

Ah, this captures the heart. Many have told me I have a fool's heart for possessing this unconditional love for someone... Someone - that a few have said is so unworthy and yet I firmly hold to my feelings and... on occasion act like an idiot because of them. Even my own gut has known the truth of some things all along, yet I can't be angry... I want to understand. My only hesitation is that I don't accept being lied to and I find another obstacle in the path that could lead to reconciliation on some level. Trust is hard to get back after such a devastation.
So.... Apparently an excellent writing - as it pushed me down the rabbit hole that i said i would not go down again... for a moment

[Sami Khalil]

But you still hold my lost soul.
A nice write.

[Natasha]

i always say" you can't understand the light if you don't understand the dark first"- i think this poem really brings truth to that statement. good writing!

[sienikeha]

i can almost hear this . screamed as death metal lyrics to the weeping of violins

[Gypsie]

Oh, lovely; pain, beauty, affection in a raw unashamed presentation. Excellent write! ;)

[The Watcher]

I find this to be immensely deep and filled with meaning. This poem is wonderful and well written with strong feelings. Kudos to you.

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

couldn't have said it better "Call me Ishmael" had said it so perfectly

great write!