Moist Pleasure

Moist Pleasure

A Poem by Jaxson Phoenix


I see you lying there before me.
A steam-filled invitation to partake of your wonders.

The scent of lavender fills the air
as I move closer to you.

Your soothing touch beckons me.


I remove this armor.

Piece by piece.

Until I stand,
cold and naked before you.

Gently, I slip between your walls.
You cover me completely
in a warm blanket of moist pleasure.

My breath is taken away.

In a euphoric state I lay,
submerged in your warm caress.
Tensions are released
and I lose consciousness.

I awake to find
what was once warm and inviting,
has now turned cold and damp.
My wrinkled skin
is now a testament
to my long slumber.

Slowly, I rise.

Taking my leave from you
I wrap my nakedness
in the comfort of a soft towel.
And leave behind
this porcelain paradise.


© 2008 Jaxson Phoenix

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Once young, then old. This is a very sensual poem. It moves
slow and absorbs the senses.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very erotic, sensual stuff here and very well written. I love the twist at the end that shows its the bathtub you're leaving and not a lover, just excellent.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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2 Reviews
Added on March 24, 2008


Jaxson Phoenix
Jaxson Phoenix

Issaquah, WA

Like many, he has sought for the meaning of life and his place in it. He wrote those thoughts in the form of poetry and ended up with a unique collection. He placed those thoughts in a book which he .. more..