Spit it, Spirit

Spit it, Spirit

A Poem by Jazmen

welcome to the spiritual dimension of a heathen,
To the soil I say hello

And to the wind - and the dry frost swirling -
I am weightless in sound energy - for in the air I blow

And scalding tears awaken me, my consciousness replanted,
like a spark within a deformed seed, cracked yet still enchanted.

Hear me heathens; here’s

An ode to all the sweet revelry; to laughter and my lover:
I bid a portrait of a heaven to believe in you and no other

Seeking the brightness to keep me alive
Singing a chora until the day we all die.

I've found the brilliance I sought to find
A permanence of grand harmony derived..

Remind me now of illness and goodness

colliding in duality

Beauty in totality.

© 2013 Jazmen

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Very distinctive, profound, deep and wittingly triumphant. A poem with commanding presence in light of a concrete message surrounded by astounding diction. Great work. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

This is like spoken word brilliance, I'd clap to this, it's somewhat bizarre though in its harmonies.

Posted 7 Years Ago

great piece jazmen
stunningly evocative
connection well made

Posted 8 Years Ago

amazing write, close to my "beliefs"...i am pagan.....and that last line was one hell of a drop. very nice attention getter!

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

thanks! this one is special cause it was written when I was first attempting to hone my lovely conce.. read more

8 Years Ago

awesome write, awesome subject, well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Incredible write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Remarkable and as you say, soulful.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This was very unique...I'm glad I stopped by to check this out. They rhyming sequence...flows beautifully. The imagery is lovely. It did bring comfort to read this...like soul food it was a very satisfying read. :)))

Posted 8 Years Ago

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. stunning ...
. absolutely stunning work ...
. i love every word and every line ...
. and, i agree with your perspective ...

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...... i have no other words right now just wow..... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on June 7, 2012
Last Updated on January 11, 2013
Tags: heathen, God, earth, soil, trees, forest, northern, enchant, beauty, spirit, spiritual, prayer, bright, positive, love, nature, being



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Studying Science and Philosophy Claim no religion and I have no categorizable political views. I am interested mostly in the new science sociocyberneering (The Venus Project + Jacque Fresco) .. more..


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