A Song of Long Ago

A Song of Long Ago

A Poem by Jazmin-Ruby
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Found this in my journal. It says July 9 of last year, but I think it's pretty old.

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Come and make your home in me 

you've surrendered love for free 

now let me love you more, I plead 

for you to have my heart 

as I search for yours 


At the end, my love, well be one

like two lips locked in kiss

is not enough

© 2013 Jazmin-Ruby


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"now let me love you more, I plead
for you to have my heart
as I search for yours"
Absolutley loved these lines, I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Great write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A bit too sensual for my taste, but from a non-professional editor's point of view, this is good. You rock the worlds of love by giving instead of taking, and that is a true gift above any. Keep up the good work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jazmin-Ruby

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Tim! By the way, it's really not meant to be sensual at all. It's actually about the intense.. read more
Tim Piotrowicz

10 Years Ago

lol ok i just saw it wrong i guess xD thank you for explaining it. now i like it more ;)
Jazmin-Ruby

10 Years Ago

I get you, though, haha. You are very welcome! :)

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Added on June 13, 2013
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Tags: Home, Surrender, Free, Wait, Heart, Love, One, End