A Song of Long Ago

A Song of Long Ago

A Poem by Jazmin-Ruby

Found this in my journal. It says July 9 of last year, but I think it's pretty old.


Come and make your home in me 

you've surrendered love for free 

now let me love you more, I plead 

for you to have my heart 

as I search for yours 

At the end, my love, well be one

like two lips locked in kiss

is not enough

© 2013 Jazmin-Ruby

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"now let me love you more, I plead
for you to have my heart
as I search for yours"
Absolutley loved these lines, I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Great write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

A bit too sensual for my taste, but from a non-professional editor's point of view, this is good. You rock the worlds of love by giving instead of taking, and that is a true gift above any. Keep up the good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

Thanks, Tim! By the way, it's really not meant to be sensual at all. It's actually about the intense.. read more
Tim Piotrowicz

7 Years Ago

lol ok i just saw it wrong i guess xD thank you for explaining it. now i like it more ;)

7 Years Ago

I get you, though, haha. You are very welcome! :)

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Added on June 13, 2013
Last Updated on June 13, 2013
Tags: Home, Surrender, Free, Wait, Heart, Love, One, End