There is no god

There is no god

A Poem by Jb

There is no god

None that I see

No hallowed, no haloed

Opus de

 

There is no god

None that I hear

Only white noise

A ringing in my ears

 

There is no god

None that I feel

Pain and numbness

Nothing to fill the void

 

There is no god

But in times of despair

I pray

Anyway

© 2019 Jb


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the lines you wrote are awesome!

Posted 4 Years Ago


The end shows the real truth behind the words. In times of trouble, there's usually one thing, person, spirit, entity on people's minds.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, indeed. You've nailed it. If only we knew how many disbelievers have a change of heart when their car stalls on the railroad tracks. (Most, I imagine) This poem says something substantial, which I like.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jb

4 Years Ago

There is a saying that there are no atheists in foxholes. We didn't have foxholes in the Navy so tha.. read more
Relic

4 Years Ago

I've had them when I look back through history.

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