Perfect Woman

Perfect Woman

A Poem by Jed Sabffle
"

"How dazzling she is."

"

In the middle of the darkness

All I could see is you

With your brightest glow

You outshine them all

 

 Those two gorgeous eyes

And your wonderful lips

They mark how splendid you are

And mesmerizing to me

 

Your mellifluous voice

Is a sweet harmony

Where I can forget my misery

And just cheer all the time

 

How naughty Cupid is    

He played with my heart

And drove it to love...

Such a perfect woman like you

© 2012 Jed Sabffle


Author's Note

Jed Sabffle
It is my first time to write a prose. Hope you'll like it. And please do leave some reviews :).. Thank you!!

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If this is your first time to write prose, then you did well. I like the way you presented the woman in this poem. What an enticing imagery you made well. Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


If this is your first time to write prose, then you did well. I like the way you presented the woman in this poem. What an enticing imagery you made well. Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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wow. you did a very good job on your first prose! you captured the picture of your "perfect woman". crafted very artistically, and the way you described her is amazing. :) the emotions are seen very clearly, especially the way you adore her..
simply flawless.. great write!! ^_^
♥♥♥

Posted 9 Years Ago


Now this one is totally amazing!
So well done and said.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was really good! Well done for your first time writing prose :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


sweet poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


The poem was truly lovely. Rightly.. every man's woman of heart id perfect in his eyes ... and you pictured it in a spectacular and artistic way.
The flow was very tender and absolutely brilliant....
Loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice poem filled with splendid and sweet words... :)))
But excuse me, nobody's perfect, haha! :p


Posted 9 Years Ago


aq pa lng?

this poem is heartfelt with the feeling of admiration that flows smoothly on each lines.. harhar imba ang eng ko..

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on December 30, 2011
Last Updated on January 2, 2012
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Jed Sabffle
Jed Sabffle

Philippines



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Hi! Thanks for dropping by. Well. All I can say about myself is that I love reading. I often read novels. And now, I wanna develop a skill in writing. Maybe it can help me to express my feelings ve.. more..

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