Deep

Deep

A Poem by Jeff

7 breathes to life

Eternal

7 touches to skin

Reaction

7 glances from the eyes

Attraction


I need you like I need air

Emotions flow between us

Sex is a heavenly action

A chemical reaction

Within our skin


Great love takes time

Sex shapes our body

Emotions shape our mind

Our souls entwine as one


If I can't give myself to you

Then none shall it be

I want to give it all to you

I want to take you within my self

Mind, body, and soul


© 2013 Jeff


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deep love in more ways than one...i wanted to read the first line with "breaths" but i may be reading that line incorrectly...

but i like the use of 777---and heavenly...with its link to perfect love---mental and emotional as well as physical.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is magical and insightful...truly a masterpiece...love is an art...as shown here...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Too romantic,
First stanza was very impressive. The flow of the poem is good too.Liked the theme of your poem
Well written.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Very romantic and passionate

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is deep; as the title suggests. Total connection of mind, body, and soul. It's worded very well and expresses that connection deeply. It also seems quite catchy. Is it by chance song lyrics? Either way, well done Jeff.

Posted 8 Years Ago


' Great love takes time.. '

Such a blissful poem, obviously as sincere as your Bio. How wonderful to love like that in both reality and words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Utterly beautiful write with just enough dose of sensuality and romance.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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:: a very beautiful piece... it's all heart and all art...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jeff

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
.

10 Years Ago

:: you're very welcome, monsieur...
Really beautiful work. Makes me want to experience that sense of love.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is a truly maginificent write on the spiritual oneness felt along with physical union of two souls. I really and truly appreciate the depth of emotion that has gone into penning this beautiful truth of love and life. Keep writing sir, you are an amazing poet!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Jeff

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