Save Us

Save Us

A Poem by Jeff

All of this

Surrounds me

Pieces of us

Lay around me

What do we do

Have we gone too far

Are we through

I built my world

Around you

Here we are

Without a clue

On what to do

To Save Us 

© 2016 Jeff


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Pax
This is what i like in a short piece, it says so few yet the messages behind it is a lifelong story... like in any relationship we go through ups and downs but then there's a time or a moments that we all go through confusion and to where answers are just too far out of reach.... and letting go to forget and forgive is this hardest to achived... this is a very well written...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very well written and a great question asked. On what to do to save us. Perhaps, forget, forgive and remember all the love that was once ours.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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