It's A Mess

It's A Mess

A Poem by Jeff

These days

Life isn't pretty

Life isn't easy

I drive myself

Insane with worry

For my boy

Is he doing alright

Is he getting the care

That he needs


Legal matters

I don't understand

Child support

More money

I don't have

Because she

Didn't want me

Leaving her for another

I didn't have

© 2010 Jeff

Author's Note

I don't like the title.

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It is a great peice though, to many people take advantage of the whlole childsupport thing, more parents should be thinking of the child, not the extra paycheck from there ex. Good topic

Posted 12 Years Ago

An overwhelming whirl of madness that it wrenches tears and causes sighs and worry..but...You Are Stronger than You may know...

Posted 12 Years Ago

The ails of adulthood, I see. How ailing they really are.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I like this short poem, its to the point. if you dont like the tittle, change it to Money Mess, or something else. overall its good

Posted 12 Years Ago

Such an overwhelming feel.. just took the breath out of me. The anxieties, the pain, the wondering... Life can often hit us right between the eyes.. can be so unkind...

Posted 12 Years Ago

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. it's much too much ... and chaotic ... i find myself in a different kind of chaos ... there's no way but to brave it out ...

Posted 12 Years Ago

I like the it!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 19, 2010
Last Updated on October 19, 2010



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