Droplets (Haiku)

Droplets (Haiku)

A Poem by Geo Lawrence
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Nature's wonder

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Ripples from droplets
Droplets from the pregnant clouds
That keep the earth green

© 2015 Geo Lawrence


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Nice one brother short and to the point!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Geo Lawrence

5 Years Ago

thanks bro
A lovely haiku with vivid imagery...nice work

Posted 5 Years Ago


Geo Lawrence

5 Years Ago

Thank u for reading and saying something
Nice haiku friend. thanks for sharing :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Geo Lawrence

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much for reading!
I love this it gives me the sense of mother Gaia, As she fertilizes our lands.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Geo Lawrence

5 Years Ago

Thank you! thank you! who is Mother Gaia?
Lasune

5 Years Ago

She was the great mother of all in Greek mythology, likened to Mother Nature, she gave birth to the .. read more
Pregnant droplets makes this work "mature"? Get rid of the warning; this is a nice haiku that deserves to be read by everyone.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Geo Lawrence

6 Years Ago

lol, thank you. I'll remove that
This is a good haiku. Nice imagery here.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Geo Lawrence

6 Years Ago

Thanks for taking pains to read this work; And thanks gore your comment...

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Geo Lawrence
Geo Lawrence

Enugu, Enugu, Nigeria



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