Darkened Romeo

Darkened Romeo

A Poem by Katannaism

Why has your soul blackened?
Why has your heart hardened?
What exactly has gone wrong?
And sadly you let it drag on for so long... 
I wish time could turn back,
when the skies were bright, not black. 
Now the ravens rule my skies... 
And the doves darkened by painful lies;
What is the wrong I have committed? 
But my life I have already submitted...
To you. 
Even though you haven't gotten a clue-
The truth is my heart stays the same.
But now, its in much more pain. 
Because of you.
My Darkened Romeo. 
My Fallen Angel. 
And I recall, you used to call me your Angel. 
Who was sweet and smelled of flowers. 
I believed your lies with much convincing. 
But now-those beliefs are drifting. 
I loved you, and I still do. 
No matter how wrong you may seem...
My heart will always belong to you. 
Keep it, if you will. 
Throw it, if you must. 
I shan't blame you. 
I blame myself.
For hurting you...
Providing such pain. 
And deceit.
So much hate in your heart. 
My Darkened Romeo... 
Where fore art thou light? 
Light up my life once more-and stay... 
I shan't forget the time we met-
When we embraced.
Professed our everlasting love.
When we kissed. 
When we cried.  
And laughed.
The joy is gone. 
The comfort-
Gone...
Oh My Darkened Romeo-
I beseech you...
Warm your heart once more-
And let the Rose Quartz take its place.
To remind you of a once magical love. 
A once beautiful beginning. 
The beginning of a future. 
A future so beautiful, dreams would envy. 
Oh My Darkened Romeo-
sit by me once more, with thy dented shoulder.
And let me rest. 
While you sing your lullaby with Angel's lips. 
And never say Good bye.

© 2011 Katannaism


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HB
Good concept, a bit long. Several of the beginning verses are superfluous, and the rhyming isn't necessary. Your slant rhymes are better. I would like to see this shaved down a bit. I like the last three verses best, along with the 5th stanza. Nice work.

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Squee! Gosh, how I love this poem!! It's beautiful and very emotional..
I also love the title.. Romeo and Juliet is one of my favorite plays and thats why I wanted to read this. >.< Its wonderful and has a different side of Romeo. =D
Great write! Wonderful work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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HB
Good concept, a bit long. Several of the beginning verses are superfluous, and the rhyming isn't necessary. Your slant rhymes are better. I would like to see this shaved down a bit. I like the last three verses best, along with the 5th stanza. Nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful write.. love the old English tossed in.. the early formed writing of Rythm and Rhyme.. this is a mixture of many forms and works well in this poem. Excellent job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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My darkened Romeo...excellent name :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aye a heartfelt write indeed! Splendid!
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this poem... It's deep.. Good Job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


this was an incredible read. excellently written and beautifully expressed emotion.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love can go downhill so suddenly. I absolutely love this piece, it is so well written. Good Job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sometimes, even true love can go wrong without warning. This piece is a wonderful representation of that fact . . . the love, hope and longing all shine through brilliantly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is very nice. I love the way how you mixed it with old English. It's impressive! I couldn't write something like that...I guess. Thumbs up my friend!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia



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