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You promised...

You promised...

A Poem by Katannaism


The 23rd, I celebrate my love. 
On the 9th, I celebrate Valentine's. 
Every passing day, I celebrate your existence. 
But now everyday I celebrate my death. 

For each passing day, is hell to me. 
Every night owns a stabbing pain. 
You promised the sunset.
By the beach. 

And the stars at your balcony. 
The time I would awake;
and see you next to me. 
Ready with a morning kiss. 

You promised everlasting love. 
And forever comfort. 
Your dearest support in my writing... 
My want to pursue in Fashion. 

Now I lost my biggest supporter. 
I can't tell you how happy I am...
With such lovely comments...
And the freedom to write...
To share...

You promised an embrace to my tears...
A healing to my sadness... 
A cure for my depression... 
But now you are the cause of it all. 
I collapse. 

You promised Truth. 
But failed to tell me on January. 
And I failed you. 
By doing so, I fail myself.

I promised my existence. 
But you killed me. 
I promised my heart.
But you threw it away. 

Your promises;
all broken.
Leaving me like broken China doll. 

Or a puppet with cut strings. 
A torn Rag Doll. 
Oh how I miss you so...
I hate that I love you... 

I lost your trust.
I lose your love...
You said you wouldn't break your promises...
That we were true love..
But its broken...

But then again...

You promised...

© 2011 Katannaism

Author's Note

Was bored... And incredibly nostalgic. My dearest Wei Shen was very close to my heart. xp
I'd feel awful if I can't vent it all out. :'(

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What deep pain confessed in a broken promise... This holds rich, dark emotion that stuns the heart and mind. So powerful.. overwhelming..

Posted 8 Years Ago

Sad and filled with palpable anger. Disappointment and broken trust shine bright in your words. Great write that wonderfully shows how difficult it is to mend a heart, and to let go ... Excellent work!

Posted 8 Years Ago

You realeased the anguish and shared it well my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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